Main Challenge (10): acrobat; grocery store; ceiling fan; dandelion; bumble bee; alabaster; scissors; chartreuse; strenuously; cube
Mini Challenge (5): iPod; poison ivy; computer; interpreter; optometrist
And it's always fun to do an extra challenge, combine the 5 + 10 and do a 15 word challenge.
My Mini Challenge (5):
"Lizzy Darling, Momma's busy on the computer right now. I am looking for some iphone accessories and need to concentrate on what I'm doing. Why don't you go play with iPod... or find Grandpa and get him to play with you?"
"Wew is iPod kitty, Momma?" asked the three year old, or at least she would be three in just a few weeks. She was the apple of her grandfather's eye, and doted upon by her parents.
"I don't know Dear. Why don't you go call him? Or see if Grandpa can help you find him?" her mother asked, only half paying attention, deep in her internet search. The little girl said something her mother didn't quite catch, and toddled off. Several minutes later, Linda absentmindedly looked out the window at her daughter in the yard, searching for the cat, and went back to her work, but only for a moment before it hit.
"Lizzy!! No!! That's poison ivy you're in!" the mother yelled as she jumped up, nearly knocking the computer desk over as she dashed out the door to rescue her daughter. She didn't need an optometrist to help her see the beginning of red on the little arms and legs already, nor did she need an interpreter to tell what this meant, to tell of the reaction the little girl was having to the plant.
My Main Wordzzle Challenge (10):
Oliver J. Mustard, retired Brigadier General, picked a dandelion for his granddaughter as he walked back home from the grocery store. It was a beautiful, hot, late spring day and Oliver was thinking about what it would take to install a ceiling fan in the living room when a bumble bee floated past his nose. Oliver laughted out loud, "You're quite the little acrobat aren't you, little buddy!" he said to the bee.
Since a sudden and severe case of apoplexy had nearly cost Oliver his life, and had cost him his career, his military attitude and strength of character had stood him in good stead. Life as he'd known it had been cut off, as if with a pair of scissors, and yet he had, thanks to the return of his daughter and her family, taken his new lifestyle in stride as he strenuously worked to regain his health and mobility.
As Oliver entered his yard through the garden gate, he was thinking about the bottle of Chartreuse he had chilling in the refridgerator, and that thought left his mind with mock speed when he saw his daughter. She was crouched down, and her face looked like alabaster as she stood up with her daughter in her arms. Taking in the scene in a nano second, he knew what had happened and went into action. "Get in the car, Linda. I'll grab some ice cubes for her and be right with you. We're taking Lizzy to Emergency!"
It was a week since what the family now referred to as the "poison ivy incident", and little Lizzy was doing well. You could barely see that she had had a terrible rash on her little arms and legs. The doctor had said it was a good thing they'd used the ice cubes to cool the skin as they brought Lizzy in where she was given medications to combat the reactions. The minute he heard what had happened to his little girl, JJ had taken a pair of scissors and cut it all down, following that with a treatment of boiling salt water to kill the roots of the plants.
JJ was now working as a computer analist and part time interpreter. His father-in-law had been forced to admit that his genes weren't from the shallow end of the pool after all. The tough ex-millitary man had grown to love the young man his daughter had taken up with, and he often laughed now about how he'd been so against it all back then.
"I think I need to go see an optometrist, Hummingbird," JJ said to his wife, still using the name she'd gone by for awhile 'back in the day'. I've been having some problems with my eye site. Nothing serious, but I might need some glasses. Can you make me an appointment tomorrow?"
"Okay, Sweety, I'll call tomorrow," she responded. When Lizzy was a baby & her father was in the early stages of recovery from his stroke, Linda had created an online business which paid fairly well, though now that her father could look after his granddaughter for part of the day, she was also working part time at the local grocery store, and loving it. "Dad, did you look into getting that ceiling fan for the livingroom? I'd like one in our bedroom too. If we're getting an electrician in to install one, we may as well have him do two." She wiped the sweat from her face with a chartreuse colored cotton napkin.
"Yes Dear, I've been busy as a bumble bee taking care of you," the old man grinned at his only child. "Is there anything else you'd like, my Dearest Dandelion?" he teased.
"Ya, Dad, I want an alabaster statue for the garden," she teased right back. Some days she had to be like a verbal acrobat just to keep up with her father's wit.
" iPod!" Lizzy said in her cute little almost-three-year-old voice as the big old cat walked through the door, into the house. She toddled off across the room to welcome her furry friend home.
"Hey, Dad," interjected JJ, "we have some wonderful news for you. You tell him, Hummingbird," he said to his wife.
"Ohhhh, there's the 'mushy name', what's up?" Oliver teased them as always.
"Daddy, we've been working strenuously... to give you a new grandchild and Lizzy a new sibling," Linda said sofly."And..."
"Are you...?" Oliver cut in with hope in his voice.
"Yes, Daddy... we are."
And here is One Sentence using ALL of the 15 words/phrases:
The acrobat with poison ivy, having been to his optometrist, listened to his chartreuse iPod as he strenuously walked home from the grocery store, carrying a 'Bumble Bee' ceiling fan, an alabaster dandelion statue, a pair of scissors, and a bag of ice cubes while planning to do some computer research into being an interpreter.
The ceiling fan goes round and round
Pushing grocery store air to the ground.
The acrobat, and interpreter too,
Pound bumble bee into glue.
Scissors cut chartreuse from red,
Making comforter for alabaster bed.
Dandelion pushes strenuously from ground,
You know the cube is not round.
Optometrist squints his eyes to see
Damage done by poison ivy.
iPod entertains a commuter
Working on his lapotp computer.
And there it is, for you unfurled,
A story of our crazy new world.
Next Week's Ten Word Challenge will be: prefix, art festival, income tax, chicken noodle soup, jump rope, Dutch Treat, flowering plum tree, bats in the belfry, diamond earrings, tigers
11 comments:
Bravo Alice. I love it. This is so good. Excellent work my friend. I'm glad that Lizzy wont be an only child...we know what attitude Hummingbird got by being one :) Keep up the good work.
WOW you've been busy with those words! iPod as a name for a cat is fun, and why is is you take your eyes of the kids for 2 seconds and something happens to them? Great writing.
Is there anything you can't do? Three seperate stories that go together to make one is fabulous but throwing in a sentence and a poem. Wow
Poor little girl. Loved your three stories that make one. I think we saw some of thoose words last week. Dragons aren't elephjants but we do remember.
Well done.
Brava! Brava! Love the continuing story. Glad the general and his daughter are so happy and that Lizzy is recovered from her poison ivy. Love the single sentence and the poem! Well done!
Oh - and congrats on the weight loss.
Wow! You were prolific this week!!!
Especially enjoyed the flow of the 3 stories and how you managed to turn the everyday into something extraordinary.
I liked the stories and the poem even more. Great job!
Great stories this week and I especially liked the poem.
Oh fabulous Alice, it flows beautifully!
Congratulations on winning the Dragon Award, you so deserve it. x
Outstanding! Bravo! Bravo! No wonder you won the dragon award! Take a bow!
I just finally got mine posted, but it can't hold a candle to this.
I wspecially liked the line about the bumble bee floating past his nose and his laughter.
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